Calon felt
something or someone around him, comforting, helping. He was so far from actual
reality that he had no idea if what he was feeling was a dream or not but he had
stopped caring. It just felt good to have some sort of comfort. When he felt
water touch his lips and then trickle into his mouth he sputtered, coughed, and
then tried to grab the source of the water. Drinking water after so long took
all of his attention. He felt the shape of his throat and the length of it as
the water reached deep into his body and being. After a moment of absorbing the
moisture he was suffused with calm and he was finally able to open his eyes.
There was Haf. Haf was holding him. Calon began to sob and shake, cry and
laugh.
They were both
talking at once. The words did not matter—but the love did. They were totally
out of control emotionally. There was no division between them, their words and
the way they held each other was all passion.
Calon, in his
feral state was the first one to feel the eyes staring again. He shouted at
Haf, “Look!” and Haf looked up just as the creature jumped at his neck and bit
him. Calon was not able to move away. He felt the weight of a large body
pressing on him from above, cutting off his view of Haf. Calon pushed feebly at
the creature but he knew his effort would only make him weaker and not help
Haf. Haf realized after the first shock of the attack that he was much stronger
than the creature attacking him and he became strategic. He moved between the
creature and Calon, protection being his first priority. Haf grabbed the
creature’s flailing arms and pinned them to its side. With a few quick moves he
had the creature pressed to the mine’s floor. There beneath him, shattered and
torn was Golau struggling and mewling.
Haf shouted her
name, “Golau!” Something in the creature’s eyes showed a flash of recognition. Golau’s
body crumpled. Haf whispered her name to her, giving it to her as a
benediction, over and over. Calon heard Haf and wanted to get to the place
where Haf had pinned Golau. Calon’s crawling was ruining him but he kept going
anyway. When Calon reached them he merged into the pile of their bodies. They laid
in a boundary less heap. Arms, legs, hands and hearts all askew. They just lay
there, breathing, as Haf whispered, “Golau, Golau, Golau” over and over in time
with his breathing.
After what may
have been minutes or hours Haf said, “I will take you home. I will take you
back to Renaissance—your home. It is your home again. I will take you home.”
Calon and Golau answered simply by pressing the hands they were holding. The
three friends sat in the silence of the mines.
Aw, I hope they can all return safely but I have my doubts! Love this ending!
ReplyDeleteThere's a gentle, even rhythmic feel to your ending. Overall, this has been a fun read. I've enjoyed your characters. :)
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this. These characters were wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments! I already miss these characters.... :(
ReplyDeleteI hope they make it home.
ReplyDeleteWonderful writing! :)
So happy about your comments! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteYay! Happy ending. :-)
ReplyDeletejana-denardo ...i tried to leave a comment on yours but wasn't able to figure it out...sorry...anyway, i wanted to say that your characters really stuck in my head. yeah for strong characters! :)
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